Viability - things are working well! The game started where it was meant to, so no worries there! It would be awesome if the game could be made to work in browser, but I can get how that would be tough to make work.
Presentation - super clean. The only thing I'd change is the color of the date/time, as they blend into the background as they are.
Theme - clear, looking really good. Definitely feels like Discord or something of the like, it works really well.
Engagement - I was engaged! I'm interested to see where the game goes!
It's looking really really good so far! The formatting is very cool, I enjoy the dialogue, evocative atmosphere of early era discord (shudder) (this is a serious compliment). Your images are broken in this upload though, they would not display for me. The only thing I might suggest for now is making the messages load slightly faster, because on pages with a lot of messages it feels slightly too slow especially if you're playing through multiple times. Great work!
Even though that it was short, it completed what it intended to strive for! I love the comments being goofy and at the same time, be a dig at someone.
-How it looks to be close to discord in inspiration/ maybe even other messaging apps! I do think having the game just jump right into the gameplay is great as well!
- I do think there could be more variety in the choices in the replies. Like it could go along with the dark humor as a route to take.
this is kinda an mixed of all the things that are meant to be separate categories. this does a good job in making you engaged!
-do you want me to show you how to add a hyperlink into your game Since i think that you can do it so people dont have to copy and paste the reader can just click instead of copying and pasting :]
-i like a lot of your choices and fake choices you have (only one option) But i think you can push that even further and i'm excited to see how you do that. (like having choices that might be intrusive or their worst thoughts and then if you click them theres maybe internal dialogue before bringing you back to make the "correct" choice. Etc)
-i think the timestamps could have a bit more contrast bc they kinda blend in and i kept not reading them and i think the timing is important since its online
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Viability - things are working well! The game started where it was meant to, so no worries there! It would be awesome if the game could be made to work in browser, but I can get how that would be tough to make work.
Presentation - super clean. The only thing I'd change is the color of the date/time, as they blend into the background as they are.
Theme - clear, looking really good. Definitely feels like Discord or something of the like, it works really well.
Engagement - I was engaged! I'm interested to see where the game goes!
It's looking really really good so far! The formatting is very cool, I enjoy the dialogue, evocative atmosphere of early era discord (shudder) (this is a serious compliment). Your images are broken in this upload though, they would not display for me. The only thing I might suggest for now is making the messages load slightly faster, because on pages with a lot of messages it feels slightly too slow especially if you're playing through multiple times. Great work!
Even though that it was short, it completed what it intended to strive for! I love the comments being goofy and at the same time, be a dig at someone.
-How it looks to be close to discord in inspiration/ maybe even other messaging apps! I do think having the game just jump right into the gameplay is great as well!
- I do think there could be more variety in the choices in the replies. Like it could go along with the dark humor as a route to take.
this is kinda an mixed of all the things that are meant to be separate categories. this does a good job in making you engaged!
- KT
-do you want me to show you how to add a hyperlink into your game Since i think that you can do it so people dont have to copy and paste the reader can just click instead of copying and pasting :]
-i like a lot of your choices and fake choices you have (only one option) But i think you can push that even further and i'm excited to see how you do that. (like having choices that might be intrusive or their worst thoughts and then if you click them theres maybe internal dialogue before bringing you back to make the "correct" choice. Etc)
-i think the timestamps could have a bit more contrast bc they kinda blend in and i kept not reading them and i think the timing is important since its online
-epic burger concept i am excited
-its viable. i assume you're gonna add more now that you have the formatting
-everything is easy to read and it makes sense to navigate.
-you have a clear structure youre working with, as well as a visual theme.i think just the thing about the timestamps
-its fun! i like reading :3